15 February 2010 @ 02:23 am
r. uzdeva rakstīt dzejoli par bankomātu līdz tās nedēļas beigām,kura beidzās pirms 2h 23min  
and this is all i have so far come up with:
(nē, es nezinu, vai drīkstēja rakstīt svešvalodā, un es nezinu, ko nozīmēja viņa noteikums "pēc iespējas konkrētāku tēlainību", un man šķiet, ka šo neņems pretī >< )




i have seen his ghastly eye
winking at me so often
as i pass by on the street

stirring my senses
enticing

his voice gruff and broken
in a primal mating call
startles me every time

alluring nonetheless

i’ve dreamt of our first encounter
where i’d caress his untended body
and he’d respond quietly purring
in a tender fondness

now
once we finally face each other
i can see that he’ll never be tamed
for he is essentially savage
a creature dangerously fierce

we be of one blood, ye and i
i mutter so meek and breathless
before the beastly ATM
PINs me to the wall
 
 
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[info]komeeta_naak on February 15th, 2010 - 04:18 am
I don't have the tendency to flatter people. so be happy you didn't receive destructive criticism :D
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cukursēne[info]saccharomyces on February 15th, 2010 - 04:22 am
are you in a good mood or something?
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[info]komeeta_naak on February 15th, 2010 - 04:24 am
no, not really, me just likey :D
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