Read overall it's strangely effective, though I don't know if it's because of some cracking lines ("A lot of football sentiments having terror as a basis"/"redeemed dreariness thought snowboarding on the imagination torturing..."/"...deficiency a considered by running over into the perfect keeping of the character of the premises of the accredited choker of the people and we are speculating upon the possible influenced") that cast some light on, on what? Forgive me for asking, but is this stream of consciousness in a foreign tongue an attempt to crack the conceits (including language conceits) of our own usual "asthmatic narrative"? I mean, are you trying to say something about the conceit of what appears to be coherently expressed thought? And do you think it would be possible to articulate what you want to say here while obeying the usual grammar/internal referencing restrictions?
With all do respect I just have given up trying to write something because I think it's not like the patient right out like to read what is written and I prefer to write it myself
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