Zeloco vervelē - Tualetes Memuāri

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Tualetes Memuāri

[Jul. 4th, 2009|01:11 am]

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Mehmeh... izdomaaju, ka jāizliek kāda daļa "tautās" un jāpavēro reakcija/komentāri/kritika... Stāstu pārrakstu jau 11 reizi, šoreiz pat izskatās cerīgi...

oi, jā, sorry, ka angliski... nerakstās man latviski.. nezinu kpc... :/

Pg 3.
"..I think my mind and senses woke up at the exact moment I muttered these words. We stopped by a car. I don't remember what kind it was. She put me on the back seat, I think. I tried sitting up, but had tough luck doing it. I didn't even notice when she got in the car or started driving. By the time I was high enough to see what's happening outside the windows we were driving down some road that lied between two green walls of trees. Forest. We must've driven really fast to get out of the city. Or maybe it just took me forever to get up high enough... Time was a stranger to me.
The blueness of everything hurt my eyes. I coughed a lot, too. I saw her hand with a bottle of some lemonade.
“You need sugar to get some energy,” I heard her voice somewhere far off. I stretched my hand that seemed to weigh a million tons in spite of it being unrealistically skinny. I think I clutched the bottle, but it fell right through my clasp as the woman let go of it, “shit.”
“It's OK, I'll try to get it,” I muttered, I couldn't really hear myself saying anything. I was more relying on my leftover sanity that I actually got to saying the words I wanted. For a second I wondered if she understood anything I was saying...
I bent down and fell sideways momentarily. My back seemed like a jelly. Still lying on my side I fished for the bottle on the car floor and seemed to find it, but had tough time raising it. After a long time I was sitting upright with the bottle in my lap trying to unscrew it. “fucking cap... forget about it..” I tossed the bottle, but it just fell sideways off my lap. Good enough.
I looked in the mirror and met with deep green eyes. “What's your name?” I said. By his time I thought I could heard myself. It sounded more like a scratchy whisper. I realized that talking hurt my throat. I've become so oblivious to pain that I might have missed a lot more pain than I actually had. Not that I was complaining...."

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From:	baleriina
Date:	July 4th, 2009 - 11:14 am

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No šī mazā gabaliņa gan neko daudz es nesapratu, ieliec kko vairāk. Es gribu zināt, kā viss sākās. *hint
Tu labi raksti angliski un katrā ziņā latviski rakstīt ir ļoti grūti, vismaz prozu, manuprāt.

p.s. bučārs bijušajā vd :* ;.

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From:	zeloco
Date:	July 6th, 2009 - 01:39 pm

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it's a teaser... really... bet nu.. I guess it is too short...
bet nu gan jau, ka shitas arii ieies bezizejaa un apstaasies kaa bikses pusmastaa... :/ Kameer nebuus pabeigts I won't really bother to advetise much... oops.. I hvae already >_<
nez... latviski viss skan.. tizli :D

p.s. paldies A________A btw - kpc nebiji uz pikniku? D:

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From:	baleriina
Date:	July 6th, 2009 - 05:44 pm

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bikses pusmastā, bļe xd tie tavi izteicieni vnk super, haha
nu nezinu, šitas mazais gabalelis nebija tik slikts, lai tu neturpinātu, es vismaz gribētu vēl ko palasīt. vnk es pati kādreiz pati rakstīju un man interesē, ko citi ražo.

angļu valoda protams ir smukāka, tas toč.

es jau tev rakstīju, ka par vēlu izlasīju ielūgumu, man gan Jūlijs Cēzars (Līga) pirms tam minēja kko par to, bet es anyway nebiju tad Rīgā, tā kā..nujā, stulbi.

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From:	zeloco
Date:	July 7th, 2009 - 12:52 pm

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;D
Meh, meh... ja izdosies tikt pāri vienai vietai, kuru nevaru nekādi izdomāt, tad varbūt ielikšu pašu sākumu.. šitādus garos lasāmos visp likt tā diezgan bezjēdzīgi... nevienam negribas lasīt palagu ar k-kādiem savervējumiem...
Uuu... Par ko tu rakstīji?

D: saks mankē bālz..

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From:	baleriina
Date:	July 11th, 2009 - 11:24 am

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ir jau tā, ka garos grūtāk lasīt, bet, ja ir interesanti uzrakstīts, nav tik traki ;. dažreiz varu baigos palagus izlasīt. *hint
rakstīju pārsvarā kkādus dzejiskos murdziņus, prozai nepietika pacietības. tad mani aizsūtīja uz vienu jauno rakstnieku "nometni", kad man bija 14 un tas manu rakstīšanas kāri iedragāja, jo tajā pasācienā visi bija daudz vecāki par mani un nemitīgi piedzērās, kas man likās stulbi xd nu jā, pēc tam protams pēc kāda laika atsāku kko skribelēt, bet tagad gan vairs sen neko neesmu rakstījusi, nav laika un vispār šķiet - ko es tur rakstīšu, tāpat sūds sanāks xd

jā, žēl, ka palaidu garām Maikla Dž. klasītes ar jums ;)

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From:	zeloco
Date:	July 11th, 2009 - 06:57 pm

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;D Trauma, lol :D nedomaaju, ka tagad ir labaak :D
U..uu!! nu iemet k-ko :) es gan no dzejas neko nesaprotu, but still...
Tas gan :(

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From:	zeloco
Date:	July 18th, 2009 - 08:53 pm

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I has good news... uztaisiiju atsevishkju blogu TM -> http://tulett.wordpress.com/ (click at your own risk)

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From:	baleriina
Date:	July 23rd, 2009 - 06:03 pm

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good work! vajadzēja jau sen uztaisīt! es riktīgi palasīšos.
*laimīgs par zeloco rīcību

aa, btw, es savus darbus moš kādreiz ielikšu kko, pagaidām man viņi tikai vecās kladēs. nu jā. bet ja ielikšu, varbūt iedošu linku, ja nenokautrēšos, hii

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From:	zeloco
Date:	July 24th, 2009 - 04:53 pm

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jesjesjes - do so ^^

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