Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 02:38 pm
Jo vārdā "apenes" ir 3 zilbes!

Haiku - (5 zilbes, 7 zilbes, 5 zilbes trīs rindiņās).

Melnas apenes
Sērfo pa Sviesta Cibu
Meklē saimnieku.
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 02:43 pm
[info]fedrs

:)
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 02:49 pm
[info]barvins

Māksla!
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 02:53 pm
[info]rediiss

:DDD
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 02:59 pm
[info]divi_g

:DD
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 03:02 pm
[info]toadbeauty

Mandomāt, neģeld.
Haikās ir jābūt norādei uz gadalaiku.
Ja apeņu vietā būtu peldbikses, tad vēl...
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 03:06 pm
[info]kemune

"A haiku traditionally contains a kigo, a defined word or phrase which symbolizes or implies the season of the poem.
Among traditionalist Japanese haiku writers, kireji and kigo are considered requirements. Kigo are not always included by modern writers of Japanese "free-form" haiku and some non-Japanese haiku."
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Wed, Sep. 30th, 2009, 03:19 pm
[info]mako

"Sērfo" šai gadījumā var uzskatīt par kigo, jo skaidri norāda uz sezonu, kurā var apakšbiksēs sērfot - t.i. uz vasaru.
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Thu, Oct. 1st, 2009, 10:42 am
[info]biezpientaure

var sērfot tīklā, sēžot pie kastes apenēs. Nu i kur te gadalaiks? :)
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Thu, Oct. 1st, 2009, 12:09 pm
[info]sirdna

"kigo, a defined word or phrase which symbolizes or implies the season"

sērfošana implicē vasaru, punkc! Ja netici, palasi haiku koda frāžu rokasgrāmatu, jaunāko izdevumu.
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Tue, Oct. 6th, 2009, 05:20 pm
[info]kinskis

+ "meklē saimnieku" implicē jurģus, ja "sērfošana" kādu nepārliecina :D
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